Sunday, March 6, 2011

Cat Tien

A moment lasts a second, but memory lasts forever. The trip was long, but the fun was short. The moment that happened unexpectedly, ironically was one of the favorite memory of mine. The moment that could have gone with me for the rest of my life. The moment was not as funny, but that turned out to be funny. A blig problem that turned out to be joke. The story begins. A couple friends of mine and I were playing video games in the room. The door was lock, and the light was off, and we kept a low profile. Thus, we could playing video games without being caught. There was a knock on my door. It sounds strange. I asked who was it but no one answer. Unexpectedly and suddenly, my friend, Eddie ran to the door and opened the door instantly. There comes Mr.Tim. It was not fun at all. He chastised us for bringing video games

2 comments:

  1. I like how you used repeated words, I think you should write clearly so that the reader can know where is the intro, the body, and the conclusion. You have a few spelling mistakes. I think you get a 7 or 8.

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